Its my first skin okay..it not good but its a start!
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Animation: You did not create the animations for this release. They are stock, so 0/10 Model: You did not create the model, Valve did. 0/10 Texture: Over 3/4ths of the original texture by Valve is still there untouched, and the changes you did do are so minimalistic and unfitting.
As Kosai said, you would have been best off handing screens off to friends and/or creating a WiP to get more C&C on this before releasing it. 1/10 (for minimal effort)
Why? Oh God, why? I mean; If its your first skin, then why even release it?
You would've been better off by releasing a WiP and getting some critique there.

Team Fortress 2
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