Well the first screen does not look bad. Could use more detail. Looks a bit plain (but that is in all the screen shots. In the second one the sofas dont go with the map. The lighting is not too good. Use different colors. For this map you should have used orange colors. Have a look at my maps. See how I use lighting. It really helps maps. In screen 3 it looks really bland. Same with 4. You used some vending machines in screen 4. It makes the map look like a zombie mod map. Screen 5 is still bland and is really blocky. Same with the last one. That one looks really.. really bland and not too good. So in later maps you should try: -Colored lighting -More detail (less bland) -better brush work

Read some more tuts. Have a look at other peoples maps. Just keep mapping and over time you will get better. Good luck.

8.3 / 10 Nice simple map. Also if it lags, did you opmotize it? Make all the brushes you cant see the nodraw texture. Best way to do that is too make the map with nodraw. Then texture it.

I think mookie said it spot on really, its a great map for one of your first maps m8, let me give u a tip.. never use the first texture u come across in most of my maps ill spot better textures when developing the map as ill end up replacing serveral wall/floor/roof whatever textures around alot, and possibly some parts may change more than 2/3 times, defo some more trims and stuff to define the tops of walls and around the edges of floors, i.e in the 3rd shot u could have checkered trims around the ramps and edges of the higher walls etc, and just generally more depth to some of the flat roofs even if its a metal beam or something like that or a vent just those extra details really help, also i would use decals/overlays to your advantage i find them a really nice and easy way to enhance your environment weather its a grid or a stain on the wall or even rubbish on the floor, nice map tho i do like the effort u have gone by with making this map, it defo shows and good luck with your future releases m8