**Posted by [TheP3CI]

Hello Teller!

I played your Map with some Friends today. Really, we didn't like it and removed it from our Server :/

Overall, your Map is pretty OK. But what I didn't like: The Terrorists need to go through sooo much Portals. I everytime lost my orientation!

Well, the Counders, at our party, they never won! It's too hard. It's nice that you gave so much time in this map, but there are too much Traps! And altough, they are all very difficult... (in my opinion). Noobs that are first time playing this map, will leave without thinking 2secs.

Well, maybe you make another Version, where are less Traps than here. And you make them easier.

I am a subscriber of Topphattwaffle and I use his tutorials very often, too, but.. ..you used them.. wow.. there is so much information in your map, same like in his tuts :)

Well, in summary, the Map is playable.. somtimes ..and for Pros.. I Gave you the Rating 4 ~ 5.

Thanks for the review :D i played the map with friends and i designed it very easy so everyone can get trough.. but! if you dont have bhop plugins enabled you are right, then.. its difficult. I made it originally for Brotcrunshers deathrun server (which has autohop on) so its may to hard for standard settings. alltough i think every deathrun map is hard for noobs and the number of the traps is normal in comparsion with other dr maps. so fazit from me is thanks for the critic but: this map has a moderate difficulty for those whohave played deathrun atleast 3-4 times and especially with bhop plugins or Bhop settings on its even a little too easy so someone ever can get trough. And your rating point realism 2/10 ?! whats so Ugly in my map ?? Q_Q I want to know :do you often play DR? ^^ so if not i can understand your rating but in my case it was like this: T´s had too few traps and my friends ever came trough (in beta) I´m soo sorry for my grammar and spelling mistakes :/ I hope you answer ^^ see ya Oh before i forget bad news for you :/ in the last version which i gonna upload tomorrow are even more traps/changed traps to STOP the Cts from ging trough to fast ... achso und du kannst auch deutsch schreiben xD

**Posted by [HaZZaRDouZ

Pros:

• Right off the bat, I love the camera angle and the citizen waving and the different angles to showcase the map.
• The map looks good. I love the whole "aqua" theme and everything!
• The layout looks amazing.

Cons:

• Lag! Even in the spawn I experienced some major lag, I do not have the best computer but I don't think it should lag that much.
• I think you added too many chat messages at the beginning, 2 or 3 is enough.
• The glass texture looks pretty bad, too much blue!
• I cannot discuss gameplay, as I could not even play the map!

Improvements:

• Tone down whatever is causing the lag whether it be the water or effects, you should look into areaportals or whatver it is that can stop sections of the map from rendering when they are not visible by the player. (I think that "gas" effect is what is causing lag.)
• Tone down the chat messages, limit it to 2 or 3 and that would be better. :P
• The glass texture is bad, please replace it.

Notes:

• I can't say much gameplay-wise, it was too laggy. I know that you have to sacrifice performance for visuals, but it was too much.

Rating:

• Due to the problems listed above, I rate this map a 6.38/10, please fix the lag issues, this looks like a great map! I am sorry about the low rating, but it is nearly unplayable, for me at least.

Thanks a looot for good review.. -The Glass texture is Removed (now CombineGlass) -110 mb smaller -a fps gain of ca. 20 Fps (in the most parts of the map) -gas effet is not making the lag its bad brushwork but im Working on ;) -its not fully compiled so its way more laggy than it should Thanks again for the awesome review maybe you can check the final_fix version Later (it will be written in the title) Sorry for the laggs but i promise that will be ficxed in about 2-3 days, its my first map since 2 years, and so at the start my Brushwork was bad but i have done alot with hints,skips, areaportals and Occluders.. the lagg will be gone and then ... Please review againwould be extreeem cool :D

but at spawn are only 3 chat messages o: then the AFK Killer and when you have entered an ending ... maybe there was something wrong but is this really too much ?

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• Interesting x 2
• Thanks x 2
• Agree x 1

**Posted by [007intruser]

looks awesome and pretty. but...why 160mb? also you should change these glasses. looks laggy for the people with poor pc.

Please read the other comments first then post a new its 80 mb now :/ but thanks for the tip i will maybe really change the glass....